Rengu Basics
Hakkai no renga is Japanese collaborative poetry, consisting of a haiku form stanza (lines of 5-7-5 syllables) followed by a stanza of two lines with seven syllables each, repeated: 575-77-575-77, etc.
Posts here have these “renga” appended as comments. Please feel free to add either a 575 or a 77 as appropriate. Succeeding stanzas should somehow fit, though “fit” here is a highly subjective term and obliquity is not to be shunned
From Robert Hass, The Essential Haiku:
The term hakkai means “sportive or playful”. It came to be applied to a kind of Japanese poetry that originated in the middle ages or earlier, called renga. Renga was a form of collaborative poetry, usually written by three or more poets, that was created by giving the tanka, the five-line poem of of the classical anthologies, a sort of call-and-response form. One poet wrote a first verse of three lines in a five syllable-seven syllable-five syllable pattern (ed. note: these first three lines of the tanka are called hokku), and the second poet completed the tanka with two seven-syllable lines.




Greg said,
May 5, 2010 @ 5:31 pm · Edit
“You’re moving too fast.”
Dad gapes at the monitor,
A wide-eyed, child’s gaze.
Greg Holden said,
May 6, 2010 @ 10:45 pm · Edit
life is moving oh so fast
I can’t let fear become me